assinment#2 Akihoto

Dear Ms. Rosa Jackson,


Thank you for sending a e-mail your request for service.
Unfortunately, our own computer had a ploblem on Friday and I'm anable to read any of the attachments of your e-mail due to file corruption. Also, part of the text in the e-mail message itself had been corrupted and was unreadable.

Would it be possible to send me it again on Monday REDUNDANT?

Please find my deepest apologies.

Best regards,

Akihito

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Dear, Ms. Rosa Jackson (Dear Ms. Rosa Jackson,)

Thank you for sending me a e-mail (your request for service).
Unfortunatry (Unfortunately), our own computer had a problem on Friday and I'm anable (I was unable) to read any of the attachments of your email due to file corruption. Also, part of the text in the email message itself had been corrupted and was unreadable.

Would it be possible to send me it again on Monday (REDUNDANT)?

Please accept my deepest apologies.

Best regards,

Akihito

JONATHON'S NOTES: Akihito, good job! You've written a very clear message with only a few minor problems. Good use of the target language. Also, be careful with that first part with the Ms. Name plus comma.