Business Correspondence Class 2

Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Assignment #1: Information, Jennifer

Dear Sally,

I'm sending this email regaring your convention itinerary. I'm not sure when you're getting back to the office. Please let me know about that. Also I want to know if you've got the new brochures.

I'm also sending attachement about some informatiton to check on your laptop.
Plase find attached a sales report for the last business quarter, a spreadsheet of clients you should try to meet, a forecast of future sales and the new specifications for minimal requirements for use of our software.

Thank you so much and good luck.

Sincerely,

Jennifer

EDITED VERSION BELOW
Dear Sally,

I'm sending this email regaring (regarding) your convention itinerary. I'm not sure when you're getting back to the office. Please let me know about that. Also I want to know if you've got the new brochures.

I'm also sending (an) attachement about some informatiton to check on your laptop. Plase find attached a sales report for the last business quarter, a spreadsheet of clients you should try to meet, a forecast of future sales and the new specifications for minimal requirements for use of our software. Thank you so much and good luck.

Sincerely,

Jennifer

JONATHON'S NOTES: Super, Jennifer! You've used the target language very well. This is exactly what I wanted. 100%! A+!

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