assignment 2 Kenta Kato

Dear Ms.Rosa Jackson,

Please accept my sinserest apologies. Unfortunately, due to some technical difficulties, your information has been lost. As well as, I am unable to read any attachment you requested.

Also, part of the massage you sent is unreadable.

Would it be possible for you to re-send your information, including the JPEG and PDF attachments?

Many thanks,

Kenta Kato

WITH EDITING NOTES
Dear Ms. Rosa Jackson,

Please accept my sincerest apologies. Unfortunately, due to some technical difficulties, your information has been lost as well as I am unable to read (lost. As well, I am unable to read) any attachment you requested.

Also, part of the email message you sent is unreadable.

Would it be possible for you to re-send your information, including the attachment (JPEG and a PDF file)? (including the JPEG and PDF attachments?)

Many thanks,

Kenta Kato

JONATHON'S NOTES: Well done. Aside from some minor sentence structure problems, you've written a very good message. Good luck with assignment number 3.